Yesterday I went to Clive river to go on the waka when we got on the waka
We had to paddle.we went under Clive bridge.his echo was loud
When we got back to school
I felt awesome
I
n writing we are learning to write recounts.
Something I did well was finishing my recount with with a sentence about How I felt.
Something I need to work on is use more Oder words.
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